Ficlet: Hey

[aeroport_art]

Title: Hey
Characters: Arthur/Merlin
Author: aeroport_art
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 400
Disclaimer: Not mine, no money being made.
Notes: I always write like this when I'm either really tired or kind of drunk (or both).
Summary: Arthur comes and Merlin quite likes it.



“Come on,” Arthur says, “Come on and come fuck me.”

You’ll come on all right, it’ll be a humdinger. Your cock in his arse and his breath on your face; his breath blooms in heat, warm like hot mead as he breathes on your cheeks—

He exhales in heaves, you breathe him in deep. Arthur kisses you hard. It’s rough, it’s fierce, it’s Arthur Pendragon and his tongue’s in your mouth.

Come on, Arthur whispers in between your teeth.

You don’t know what he’s begging for; he’s a little cock slut. Your cock’s in his arse and he’s rocking for more, hips bobbing up and down like it isn’t your dick thrust inside of him. Riding him. Flesh to flesh and digging deep for the rest—

Your heart beats quick, his arse clenches your dick. Merlin, he says, and his legs spread wide. It’s a sign. The inner skin of his knees speak to you and it’s clear. They say:

Want you buried between, like you weren’t born apart. And Merlin, you haven’t the heart to deny him anything. He hides his face in the space between pillows—bites a corner, locks his ankles, his legs twining around you in the tightest of snares.

Arthur’s blond hair is in his face. Arthur’s face as he falls from grace—

God, you swear under your breath. Arthur's stretched taut, string of a lute that’s been plucked and shivering.

Come on, you hear yourself saying, Arthur, come on. Arthur listens for once, keeps coming for you. You ride it out, letting go yourself. Your head drops forth and Arthur cranes up for your mouth, catches it, nurses it. Lips pursing throughout until you’re both tired, drawn out.

There are low-murmured breaths shared between the breadth of your bodies (the space it takes to spread your fingers and touch). Arthur’s ring finger lingers over your thumb and you crook it just so, small reminder that he shouldn’t roll away. He wouldn’t anyway, but still you keep him close. Your throat gritty and hoarse, you say:

“Hey,” you say. “Hey let me stay this time. I won’t be in your way. I’ll wake myself when the sun’s come up, slip away before anyone else gets up—”

Clucking his tongue like a mother hen, Arthur paws down at your fringe ‘till it’s over your eyes. He sighs, replies, “Go to sleep, Merlin. Stay here for the night.”

Comments

[honeymull.livejournal.com]

Oh, gorgeous. I'm still pre-coffee right now, or I'd have more words, but this really is just exquisite. ♥

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Thank you hunny buns <3 I hope you got your coffee!!!!

[bentrumors.livejournal.com]

Oh. my. :)

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

XD

[agreva.livejournal.com]

Guh! I don't know what else to say but, hot damn!!

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

"Hot damn" will work just fine. Thanks!

[neptuneskisses.livejournal.com]

Ooh yum!! This is so hot, and I just love the slight sadness at the end with Merlin asking whether he can stay this time.... fab!!

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Thank you darling :D:D:D

[lexzilla.livejournal.com]

(read it as original fic because of the whole not seen Merlin thing....)

But GAH! It was so hot and enticing.

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Yey you liked it!!! \o/

Hey honey, if you ever do want to check out the show, try sidereel (http://www.sidereel.com/Merlin). They've got it there.

[ineptshieldmaid.livejournal.com]

Arthur’s blond hair is in his face. Arthur’s face as he falls from grace—

Lovely use of rhyme and repetition there :) Also, SECOND PERSON FTW.

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Haha I'm glad you liked the 2nd person. I personally hate to read it, so this was more self-indulgent than anything. It's like a bonus if people actually enjoy it! \o/

[marn-barn.livejournal.com]

Wow, this is cool. It's not often that there's a porn fic written in second person, and this is just lovely.

(Also, love your mood theme. Dean's so cute when he's stuffing his face. He's like the best priest ever)

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Dean is indeed a total cutie. Thanks for the feedback!

[elven-wolf.livejournal.com]

Hot damn...

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Hee!

[alizarin-nyc.livejournal.com]

VERY nice.

Lovely poetry, like this: Arthur’s face as he falls from grace—

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

HEE cute icon!

Thanks for the wonderful feedback, hon.

[euraylie.livejournal.com]

I was hooked from the first line. Hot! And yes I can totally see Arthur being a little cock slut. He's just a whore like that.

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

YES. YES HE IS.

[xel1980.livejournal.com]

This is really awesome!!!

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it!

[queenofthedark.livejournal.com]

that was great
i loved it :D
i liked the ending i thought it was dead cute x

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Good to hear :D Thanks for the feedback hon.

[dark-angelis.livejournal.com]

Wow, this is amazing. Not only is the writing itself excellent but you've managed to include three of my major kinks (top!Merlin, bottom!Arthur and slutty!Arthur) so I pretty much love you right now :D I liked the contrast between the brutal passion of the sex and Merlin's vulnerability at the end, pleading with Arthur to let him stay. Lovely fic, wonderful job.

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Gah, what amazing comments! I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story that much :D And it's funny, I'm totally a top!Merlin kinda gal but when I wrote this, it just turned out the other way.

[matan4il.livejournal.com]

I think you've precisely captured everything that makes Sub!Arthur so enticing, the sex was very hot and awwwwww, I was so happy that Merlin IS staying the night. Awesome combination you've acheived, especially in a short fic. Thank you.

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Awww, your comments totally put a smile on my face. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story <3

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading!! I try not to cross-post too much though, so I think I'm just gonna keep it to my journal and merlinxarthur. It makes me feel all slutty when I post to more than one comm :0

[anamuan.livejournal.com]

this is gorgeous. the meter. the vowels. it whirls you up and you ride away.

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Aww, thanks for sayin so *__*

Does your icon mean IPA, the beer? Because I just had one earlier. Good stuff.

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

:D Anytime, anytime!

[ravenflight21.livejournal.com]

Wow - hot little fic! Like your medieval imagery!

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Yay, thanks for the sweet feedback!

[delonariel.livejournal.com]

GUH. So glad to find you're writing for this fandom. Hopefully there will be lots of porn to look forward to

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

An SPN transplant, I take it? :D:D:D It's always nice to hear from a fellow fandom-ite!!

[ismenetruth.livejournal.com]

Uh, so I was stalking your journal after I read "an arse..." and found this and - damn, woman. [I am making blatant assertions about your gender, yes]

So, besides being unbelievably hot, this is going to be really memorable for the writing, which sometimes comes really close to poetry. I love a writer who knows what to do with assonance. Seriously, I'll be in my bunk - thinking about the words, not the porn. [or the words that make up the porn, whatever]

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

(I'd say that's a safe assumption to make, in slash fandom). Thank you so much for your kind kind words *__* I'm flattered that it read like poetry to you!! I feel like I wind up doing a lot of shorts that sound weird and poetic, but if it actually stays interesting for people? All the better.

[mooyoo.livejournal.com]

Very nice, vry lyrical writing. The second person POV really works here, I especially like the way that Merlin basically refers to himself with And Merlin, you haven’t the heart to deny him anything.

“Hey,” you say. “Hey let me stay this time. I won’t be in your way. I’ll wake myself when the sun’s come up, slip away before anyone else gets up—”

Ouch. The ending is almost bittersweet, that Merlin feels he has to convince Arthur to let him stay, kind of a reminder of what serperates them even after they connected like this.

But then, of course, Arthur has him stay :)

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

hi baby hi hi hi

Your fb is awesome. AWESOME, I SAY.

xoxo

p.s. omg the tobago thing...i'm SO SICK OF MY FRIENDS. i'm thisclose to calling the whole thing off through a passive aggressive e-mail. but i'm leaning more towards ignoring the trip-planning until it gets obvious it's not gonna happen, in a greater gesture of passive aggressiveness. so in my head, barring them actually stepping up, tobago is OVER. UGH. this whole thing was just an exercise in stressing me out and making me feel stupid for even trying :P and there's no way in hell i'm planning a bday dinner or club night now, much less a bday vaca. OVER IT OVER IT OVER IT i want a hug rachie ;_;

[aeroport_art.livejournal.com]

Haha oh gosh, this old thing!!