western!AU beta call
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aeroport_artWestern!AU Part One is FINISHED, sitting pretty at 23k words. I'm taking beta readers.
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pjvilar and oxoniensis, I've mentioned having you guys look this over for me in the past so I'll e-mail you both soon :O
alethialia, I don't know if you're the beta-reading type but your thinky!comments are so insanely awesome, I would be super indebted to you if you're interested!
As for anyone else who has a critical eye and an interest, hit me up in the comments. I can send a doc over asap.
xxxo (the M.I.A. song is in my head...)
pjvilar and oxoniensis, I've mentioned having you guys look this over for me in the past so I'll e-mail you both soon :Oalethialia, I don't know if you're the beta-reading type but your thinky!comments are so insanely awesome, I would be super indebted to you if you're interested!As for anyone else who has a critical eye and an interest, hit me up in the comments. I can send a doc over asap.
xxxo (the M.I.A. song is in my head...)
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Date: 2010-07-02 05:42 am (UTC)Send it to me! I shall take a look at it, um, tomorrow! alethialia [at] gmail.
Did I mention YAYYYY? Just sayin'...
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Date: 2010-07-02 05:57 am (UTC)Sending you now.
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Date: 2010-07-02 02:04 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-07-02 10:07 pm (UTC)western!AU beta call
Date: 2010-07-02 09:48 pm (UTC)I just wish I had any beta skillz to offer
so that I'd get to read the last part earlier!!! Rawrbut I'll be here to squee and flail, as usual ;pRe: western!AU beta call
Date: 2010-07-02 10:03 pm (UTC)western!AU beta call
Date: 2010-07-02 10:27 pm (UTC)Don't worry, I'm pretty much a UST-whore (I'm also a tease ;p) and yours is sah delish, I'll be there for sure! *hugs*
Oh, and does that mean that part 1 was completely posted? b/c that'd mean you're even *more* of a tease than I am with your evil cliffies! X)
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Date: 2010-07-02 10:35 pm (UTC)Cruel, I know!! Please don't hate >___<
Re: western!AU beta call
Date: 2010-07-03 01:41 pm (UTC)Though this: "the leaner, meaner fic" makes me happy, b/c I was already rejoicing in the thought of reading it all in one setting, but now I'm looking forward to the changes you brought to it!
Nah, I won't hate, I'll just randomly gifspam you:
JUST BECAUSE!
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Date: 2010-07-04 04:49 am (UTC)Re: western!AU beta call
Date: 2010-07-07 11:04 pm (UTC)I feel the 1st one's a good example of (un)intentionally sexy doesn't-realize-how-hot-he-is boy. I'm sure the guy came up to tell him to stop his obscene display for the sake of the training, b/c Titi has just scored against his own team and Messi stepped on the ball and fell but no one even noticed, they were too busy: *___*
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Date: 2010-07-02 11:04 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2010-07-03 02:36 am (UTC)Just FYI (and this is something that I warn everyone before I start looking at their work) I tend to be a pretty exacting beta, more the type of "you sure of that narrative choice?" and "I'm not sure that voice is quiet right" and less "no comma here, you spelled that wrong there" (probs because I am not very good at commas or spelling, to be honest >.>). Some people like that, and some people don't, it's totally a matter of personal preference, and no judgment either way. You still, up for it?
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Date: 2010-07-03 02:52 am (UTC)